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I wasnt able to finish this....

... not because of content (I wont comment on that)

but because of your dramatic (?) pauses. Theres no need to watch the top of a train for 10 secs or anything else for more than a moment.

deadly1018 responds:

dramatic pauses mostly just lag. i have a problem with that though. i tend to draw that stuff out far to long, and in a rush just to get past a scene i dont like to do i jsut make a quick bs one and go on to the next one, though i will take it to consideration to keep things alot shorter in the next movies that are yet to come. so thank your for the review!