I wasnt able to finish this....
... not because of content (I wont comment on that)
but because of your dramatic (?) pauses. Theres no need to watch the top of a train for 10 secs or anything else for more than a moment.
dramatic pauses mostly just lag. i have a problem with that though. i tend to draw that stuff out far to long, and in a rush just to get past a scene i dont like to do i jsut make a quick bs one and go on to the next one, though i will take it to consideration to keep things alot shorter in the next movies that are yet to come. so thank your for the review!
just one improvement for part 5 please-
For a fast paced flash, we don't want to see pauses after every cut.
well ok tnx
i realy want reviews with thing that can make me better ^^
if you want to help me improuve then review me :D
It's been so long since I played the game, but I still remember lots of this stuff.
good. except bad audio
the crackling audio made me go mad.
your animation was great.
i look forward to seeing any future animations.
very cool drawings you got there.
suggestion- background music would make the slow parts (yes there were slow parts) go by faster.
a preloader would be nice.
a preloader would be very nice.
what a massive file size, perhaps you should consider planning out your movies so they are both small and exciting!!!
else good job
but you really need to clean up your spelling.
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